The move

The headline "Multiplacement targeting builds efficiencies and delivers qualified leads" sits over two large figures, 68% (more efficient CPA two weeks after implementing multi-placement) and 40% (sales-qualified accounts sourced from Reddit that converted into opportunities), with a source line. Beside them is the real Huntress promoted post, "Is Your Data Living Up To Its Potential?". Below are Background, Strategy and Outcome sections, then a quote from Kyle Munson.

Why it works

• Our readEach number carries a short definition, and one "Source: Reddit Internal, Client Internal" line sits under both, so what is being measured is on the page.
• Our readShowing the real promoted post, with a carousel to see more, shows what a Reddit ad for this category looks like.
• Our readThe short headed sections make Strategy and Outcome easy to find without reading Background.

What not to copy

Don't copy the platform's own metrics as if they are yours; use numbers you can source. Keep the top block: two defined results, a source line and the real creative in the first screen.